Brooke's learning blog

This is my learning blog where I will put my learning and posts to do around school like my roles, writing, learning and more.

Wednesday 6 May 2015

My poem lollies

Lollies

The sour lollies danced across the table
They laughed as they entered the packet


A big hand comes to get the sour but 
Sweet singing lollies

Yum tasty, sweet, sugar, colourful lollies
Next minute they are in a deep dark hole

I think I am relational because I can use strategys and know when and why to use them.

The language features I used in my poem were...
Alliteration... I used this language feature because it makes it more descriptive.
Personification... I used this language feature because it makes it sound like a person.

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