The sour lollies danced across the table
They laughed as they entered the packet
A big hand comes to get the sour but
Sweet singing lollies
Yum tasty, sweet, sugar, colourful lollies
Next minute they are in a deep dark hole
I think I am relational because I can use strategys and know when and why to use them.
The language features I used in my poem were...
Alliteration... I used this language feature because it makes it more descriptive.
Personification... I used this language feature because it makes it sound like a person.